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Feelings

October 18, 2013
By brittafischer PLATINUM, Dulles, Virginia
brittafischer PLATINUM, Dulles, Virginia
29 articles 5 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some are born great, some achieve greatness, and some have greatness thrust upon 'em"


There’s nothing like the rush,
of feelings when he touches me.
The literal flip and flutter in my stomach,
as his hand touches my cheek.
It sounds cheesy, but his smile,
really does things to me.
It makes me want to grin and stare and kiss.
I’ve never been in love,
but this might be what it feels like.
Never wanting to see him with others,
hugging, smiling, laughing.
It makes me sad,
which sounds odd I guess,
but knowing I can’t be with him breaks my heart a little.
I miss it, the simple love of friendship,
because all of a sudden, I feel something more.
But maybe, just maybe, he’ll see me the way I see him,
someday.



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on Oct. 22 2013 at 5:49 pm
brittafischer PLATINUM, Dulles, Virginia
29 articles 5 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some are born great, some achieve greatness, and some have greatness thrust upon 'em"

Wow! Thank you so much. That is so kind of you! I'm sure your writing is beautiful!

on Oct. 21 2013 at 7:14 pm
revelationsmirrored GOLD, Joliet, Illinois
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This is beautiful I really wish I could write like you do.

on Oct. 21 2013 at 4:07 pm
brittafischer PLATINUM, Dulles, Virginia
29 articles 5 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some are born great, some achieve greatness, and some have greatness thrust upon 'em"

You're so sweet! Thank you so much for your amazing compliments. I really appreciate it!

on Oct. 21 2013 at 4:06 pm
brittafischer PLATINUM, Dulles, Virginia
29 articles 5 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some are born great, some achieve greatness, and some have greatness thrust upon 'em"

Thank you so much for reading and appreciating. I'm glad other people can relate.

on Oct. 21 2013 at 1:17 pm
nomonrosii BRONZE, Saugerties, New York
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"The reaon for living is getting ready to stay dead"

This is such a beautiful piece! I can really relate to everything in your poem. I especially like the line "the literal flip and flutter in my stomach". Beautiful

on Oct. 21 2013 at 9:30 am
Demoderby PLATINUM, Pontiac, Illinois
28 articles 13 photos 93 comments

Favorite Quote:
All that we see or dream is but a dream within a dream
-Edgar Allen Poe

I know how thif feels, and hearing it from someone else is nice. Thank you for sharing this with me and all the other people. I enjoyed reading it and hearing that someone else feels like that when I thought I was the only one.

on Oct. 21 2013 at 7:11 am
brittafischer PLATINUM, Dulles, Virginia
29 articles 5 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some are born great, some achieve greatness, and some have greatness thrust upon 'em"

Awwww... thank you. I needed to write it. I'm glad you enjoyed it

on Oct. 21 2013 at 12:15 am
AndSoItGoes01 SILVER, Reno, Nevada
9 articles 0 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The winter I told you icicles are magic, you stole an enormous icicle from my neighbors shingle, and gave it to me as a gift, I kept it in my freezer for seven months. Love isn't always magic, sometimes it's melting." -Andrea Gibson

Thank you for this. I needed it.