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What I never noticed

November 2, 2013
By Peacemakerz PLATINUM, Cupertino, California
Peacemakerz PLATINUM, Cupertino, California
25 articles 2 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
The world will never have lasting peace so long as men reserve for war the finest human qualities. Peace, no less than war, requires idealism and self-sacrifice and a righteous and dynamic faith.
-John Foster Dulles


It struck me, the girl was beautiful.
Her face, enlightened showing her own light
Her face revealed harmony and tranquility.
The blond streaks on her body outlined her curves.
She was a sight.

Her walk was graceful, uncovering her long legs that rested upon large soles that defined beauty.
High definition were her strides.
Each one took every step along the way with patience.
She was a peaceful soul.

Time is limited and she took every moment in laughter.
She preached justice and in tolerated oppression.
In her eyes is a vision.
A powerful one, that stands worthy of action.
Long dark journeys chased her, leaving a streek of hazel.
Her strides reached for miles, her footprints planted everywhere.
It seemed that only her eyes could leave a mark; an effect.
Recognizing what others cannot see, she was special in her own way.
She is a visionary.

Everyone admired her, she was describes as a perfect package. With a cherry on top.
She had a purpose no one understood
My hair brown, her's unknown.
Her posture, mirrored the tree I had admired for several years.
She was physically unapealing but spiritually irresistable.

I laid back, distracted by her appearance.
I tried to make eye contact with her, my eyes missibg her with every trial.

Under the moonlight, she glowed!
Shinin' bright yellow.
She is unique.

I can't believe I'm saying this; I really can't, but she is beautiful in her own way!


The author's comments:
As a lady, we often have a distorted self-image about ourselves. We miss, what others find in us that makes us so extraordinary. Often, we may need someone like a man to tell us how beautiful we are. Beauty doesn't neccesarily mean physically, it can mean spiritually.

I want a leave you with this message, whoever you are do not obsess over your looks. Looks will fade, but whatever you carry internally will live eternally. Nonetheless, it takes only one person to understand the value of a person. To conclude, " Never underestimate anyone, because no one is
not worth living. After all, God made sure every heartbeat has a reason to live."

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on Jan. 4 2014 at 8:15 pm
Peacemakerz PLATINUM, Cupertino, California
25 articles 2 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
The world will never have lasting peace so long as men reserve for war the finest human qualities. Peace, no less than war, requires idealism and self-sacrifice and a righteous and dynamic faith.
-John Foster Dulles

Thanks guys!

on Jan. 4 2014 at 1:47 pm
haley101 DIAMOND, Windsor, Connecticut
70 articles 5 photos 195 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Someone I loved once gave me a box full of darkness. It took me years to understand that this too, was a gift.”

― Mary Oliver

I love the message that you are portraying here. Great job!

on Nov. 5 2013 at 10:22 pm
Secluded_Savior GOLD, Omaha, Nebraska
14 articles 0 photos 6 comments
This is just so beautiful. Girls all around need to be told how beautiful and awesome they are.