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I AM BLANK!!!!

November 7, 2013
By Shards_of_my_soul GOLD, BHUBANESWAR, Other
Shards_of_my_soul GOLD, BHUBANESWAR, Other
17 articles 15 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
if you can't handle me at my worst,
then you certainly don't deserve at my best!

it is the events that shape our lives,
but it is the choices we make that define us...

life is not about finding yourself,
life is about creating yourself


Pen in hand, paper in sight,
In vain I struggle to write,
As no ideas I strike me,
And no inspiration do I see.

Oh, how much I want my pen’s ink to flow,
How much I want everyone’s mind to blow,
But curse my lazy brain,
I’m not even able to describe a sprain!!!

Time is ticking by
My pen’s ink is running dry…
Sweat trickles down my face,
And of ideas…there is still no trace.

My ears are ringing with my mother’s shout,
And my patience is all out…
I valiantly throw myself on the notepad
In a last attempt….only to succeed a tad…
With a flourish I write the headline,
“I AM ALL BLANK!!!”



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on Feb. 23 2014 at 2:52 am
Shards_of_my_soul GOLD, BHUBANESWAR, Other
17 articles 15 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
if you can't handle me at my worst,
then you certainly don't deserve at my best!

it is the events that shape our lives,
but it is the choices we make that define us...

life is not about finding yourself,
life is about creating yourself

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! it feels really good when your work gets recognised, even if by a few.....thanks once again, for taking your time to read my works and comment on them!!!!!!!!

on Feb. 21 2014 at 8:30 pm
Still_Thinking GOLD, Hebron, Connecticut
10 articles 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When I said that Mercy stood
Within the borders by the wood,
I meant the lenient beast with claws
And bloody swift-dispatching jaws."
~LAWRENCE SPINGARN

This piece is sublime! It is rhymed very well and ends on a perfect note! It flows smoothly from line to line and I see that despite it being about one's inability to write, you in fact had no trouble creating such a beautiful work of art.