Certainly interesting!The lack of formatting was a tad awkward, but didn't harm the flow too significantly. I like the thought that, if we could see the scars we all bear on our hearts, we may be a little less gaurded ouselves. Sometimes I'm afraid, however, that seeing those scars. It reminds me of a conversation with a friend where I complained about a million worries, then broke down, apologizing. I wasn't sorry for sharing, I was sorry because it hit me that everone has their own crap to deal with, even if you can't see it. If hers was as heavy as mine, she didn't deserve it!
Just thought I'd let you know about this poems impact on me. I know, its about heartbreak, I know its about betrayal and love, but this is how it hit me. This is a worthwhile peice, though; don't doubt it! Write on, ansem!