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dancing in the rain

January 25, 2014
By Beautiful_Abomination-16 GOLD, Bend , Oregon
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Beautiful_Abomination-16 GOLD, Bend , Oregon
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I am lost in all the darkness of my sins, but your love is what lights my path, the whole way through all of it

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i feel inside only shame,
i will always live in vain,
i have just a broken heart,
my soul is falling apart,

just standing in the background alone,
screaming a sad broken crying tone,
no one knows, feels my pain,
but i will be bold, break from my cage,
and dance in the falling rain...

© Jessica L., San Jose, CA

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TheComet PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 7 2014 at 6:38 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
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"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

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I like it how you started so desperate and ended dancing in the falling rain ;) I love rain too and i'm a big fan of it you should read my poem called Rainy Day i think you'll like it too. Great work keep writing ^_^
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on May. 17 2014 at 1:24 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

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Amazing! 5 stars
Sunshine2420 SILVER said...
on May. 13 2014 at 2:15 am
Sunshine2420 SILVER, Unknown, Other
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This poem's really touching
-Yin- SILVER said...
on Jan. 31 2014 at 8:57 pm
-Yin- SILVER, Falls Church, Virginia
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5 stars, i love it and understand