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everything i ask for

February 2, 2014
By j.g.poems PLATINUM, Naples, Florida
j.g.poems PLATINUM, Naples, Florida
29 articles 6 photos 43 comments

I don't think you realize,
How unique and uncommon,
You, as a person, are.
You are amazingly brilliant.
You have such a generous heart.
I only wish,
You could see,
What I see.
Not physically,
Not appearance wise,
But everything besides that.
I hope to see you,
Tomorrow, next week,
In a month, in a year,
With me by your side.
Lust has overcome us,
And love came crashing in.
As unexpected as it all was,
It could not have gone any better.
I sometimes think of you,
Of us,
And smile,
Because you are everything,
I have ever wanted,
And more.

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on Feb. 13 2014 at 10:38 pm
TheMaskedPoet SILVER, Temple, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"I wish I could be a little less dramatic, like a Kennedy when Camelot went down in Flames." -Miranda Lambert

It's super relatable and really good. The only criticism I have is I wish it was more structured, it kinda seems messy but that's just my opinion, not something you have to do. Great job!!!

on Feb. 11 2014 at 7:53 am
skydancer666 GOLD, West Babylon, New York
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Favorite Quote:
on my own i am clumsy ..... but on your shoulders i am free to be me

i like this i personally can relate to this !!!!!!