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The boy who stole her love

February 23, 2014
By _Isabelle_ BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
_Isabelle_ BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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Hey....
Is it weird when your on a swing.
Surrounded by a boy who looks nice,
but is really mean.
And is about to hurt you,
when you don't know,
It and gets you by surprise.
Then when your still in shock he takes you away.
Right before your eyes.....
He knocks you out and...and...
Takes your love by a kiss.


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on Jul. 24 2014 at 2:36 pm
_Isabelle_ BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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Thanks! !      

on May. 27 2014 at 6:42 pm
AllSoPlayfulWhenYouDemonize BRONZE, Richmond, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Our passion is our strength."
-Billie Joe Armstrong

Aw<3 AMAzInG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Apr. 9 2014 at 11:19 am
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great poem. i love the way you wrote it :)