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A Thousand Years

March 13, 2014
By Samtom311 PLATINUM, Delray Beach, Florida
Samtom311 PLATINUM, Delray Beach, Florida
27 articles 3 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I worship individuals for their highest possibilities as individuals, and I loathe humanity, for its failure to live up to these possibilities." -Ayn Rand


A thousand years ago,
I fell in love.

Back when white, fluffy clouds sailed across the brilliant blue sky,
And the stars could be seen winking in the black, velvet cloth of night.

That fateful year,
you captured me in the throes of your love—
Easing;
Soothing;
Caressing;
the loneliness away.

You were my sun.
Always there to greet me in the morning,
with your laugh full of life and love.

You were my stars.
Always there to comfort me—
even when I couldn’t see you.

You left me though.
Setting our time of love,
down into the recesses of the Earth.
Never to be seen again.

You sent me into the murky depths
of bitter despair,
as I witnessed you—
Who always promised to be there for me;
to always love me—
Run off with your new and deceiving mistress:
Death.

I watched as your eyes turned to glass,
and mine turned to shells.

Only to contain the smallest flicker of life;
The tiniest candle for comfort
in the darkness of your absence.
But, that was a thousand years ago.
Yet,
If you listen hard enough,
You can still hear my heart shattering into infinite pieces.



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on Apr. 3 2014 at 5:40 pm
WinterRose76 SILVER, Ok., Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Arise and be all that you dream - Flyleaf

Gorgeous poem! The imagery is amazing and your word choices work perfectly. Please keep writing!  5/5

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on Mar. 26 2014 at 9:15 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 631 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green

Beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful. What is there more to say? Your metaphors are wonderful. Wording is brilliant. As always, you're going to go so far with your writing;  you have so, so much talent, Lisha! I hope you write more poems like this and follow your dreams as a writer; your imagery capabilities are astounding. Love it, and all you do! :)