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Eternity

April 11, 2014
By BilliJoBaumann SILVER, Anaconda, Montana
BilliJoBaumann SILVER, Anaconda, Montana
6 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life may have limits, but you can always exceed them."-Billi Jo Baumann


In the darkness she waits, sitting and staring at the wall, the wall painted in the darkest red, no one has ever seen her yet they all know of her existence.

Her grace is that of an angel but with the will of a devil, evil burns inside her like a raging fire that cant be extinguished. So silently she waits, waiting for the right moment.

In the light he waits, sitting and staring at the wall, the wall painted in the brightest blue, everyone has seen him yet she doesn't know of his existence.

His grace is that of a devil but with the will of an angel, good flows through him like a raging river with no end, so silently he waits, waiting for the right moment.

The light of day burns her, scares her of what it may bring, she hopes and wishes of not being afraid of them and their cruelty.

The dead of night does not scare him, it thrills him, fills him with the feelings of hurt the only one who would understand, upon her door he waits, waiting for the right moment.

Shuffling footsteps turn her to her door, wondering who or what is coming for her she opens it quickly.

He sees her, for who she is and not by her scars, he sees her pain and frustration and he stands before her.

She sees him, for who he is and not by his achievements, she sees his suffering in defeat and she stand before him.

One broken heart heals the other, now and for eternity.


The author's comments:
I wrote this for advanced writing and it is my favorite piece that i have written so far.

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Creativia said...
on May. 8 2014 at 5:55 pm
Creativia, Oviedo, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Do to others as you would have them do to you"

Incredible!

on Apr. 28 2014 at 5:57 pm
iimoeloveii GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
14 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
IF YOU CAN'T HANG THEN THERE'S THE DOOR-SLEEPING WITH SIRENS

GREAT WORK!!!

on Apr. 26 2014 at 2:29 pm
Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
87 articles 0 photos 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, "Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping." - Fred Rogers

While I'm not a huge fan of repeating the same sentences with words slightly different to show contrast, I like it. (I've repeated the same sentences with some words changed a lot, so I'm sort of a hypocrite.) I give it a 3.5/5

on Apr. 25 2014 at 5:48 pm
BilliJoBaumann SILVER, Anaconda, Montana
6 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life may have limits, but you can always exceed them."-Billi Jo Baumann

so do i. it happened to one of my friends right after i wrote it which i thought was weird.  

on Apr. 21 2014 at 3:29 pm
KayliLovesYou PLATINUM, Lincoln, Nebraska
25 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont cry because it is over smile because it happened

all i can say with this piece is wow i wish that would happen for me aswelll really well done