Rememberenece | Teen Ink


April 23, 2014
By Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 433 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

I am once again transported to those magical days,
To where contagious giggles explode from the two,
And avoiding those glorious glances as we stole stares,
To the wonderful smiles and quirky behavior as we strolled down our way,
I am transported to our days on the bleachers,
Where we looked at one each other and couldn't help but smile,
Your shy eyes that blazed with the hurt you were given,
The larger rosy cheeks than burn with the blushes,
When two hearts burn closer as one rather than two,
When the words were sung, I love you,
Then the joyous months embarked,
Skipping down the school yard,
Nothing in our way,
Our cheeks touching, our hands intertwined
Deep with in that oak tree,
I remember the poems and promises we displayed to one another,
the wonder of how this can get any better,
You were my angel,
My light in the dark,
You were my savior,
The one I could not live without,
You were the breath that engulfed me with joy,
You were the one, that the stars foretold,
How the memories of love burn brighter than all,
How I still see your face wherever I go,
How your voice is seared in my brain with amazement
And how I remember the best days with thee,
I remember the days when it rained
And with smiles ablaze,
We danced as if the world was only us,
We pranced as if we will forever be young,
We loved as if our hearts may never be filled,
I remember the endless nights,
Where we held each other close,
Protecting each other from the occurring storms,
Creating a ray of sun in our stormy days,
I remember the curves of perfection you held with care,
The endless poking wars that ended with kisses goodnight,
Goodnight love,
Goodnight babe,
I remember us,
I remember always
I remember heaven with you

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This article has 3 comments.

Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Aug. 5 2014 at 12:22 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 631 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green

Wow. Every word is flooded with emotion! I love your technique, Luna, where you refuse to use periods haha. It really connects every line to each other perfectly. It's a lovely poem, and I really enjoyed reading it! 

on Apr. 29 2014 at 8:16 pm
nithyaswaminathan BRONZE, Pleasanton, California
2 articles 0 photos 59 comments
wow this was hearfelt. I think i am crying. Your imagery is awesome.

on Apr. 29 2014 at 7:29 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
1 article 0 photos 274 comments

Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

Fallen your work has always made me cry. And this is coming from a guy. I loved it one hundred percent!!