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May 8, 2014
By ShadowPen GOLD, Mesa, Arizona
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ShadowPen GOLD, Mesa, Arizona
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&ldquo;Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius and it&#039;s better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring.&rdquo; <br /> <br /> ― Marilyn Monroe

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Salty winds bite my face,
and sand tickles my toes.
Sadly noone can see me
all the way down here
staring at the blue sky,
or water? I cannot tell.
The waves and clouds they roll by
their secret tales to tell.
Storms with winds that whistle
and roar inhumanly,
sink me to my knees as I remember
where I am supposed to be
a glance at at the sky,
or waves? Reminds me.

© Daniel H., Oak Bluffs, MA

The author's comments:
I took my interest of the ocean and concerns of my life to write this poem. Using metaphors about the sky and the waves of the ocean. How standing under water I cant breathe as much as I can on land.
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