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Unconscious Writing

May 19, 2014
By Katgirl SILVER, Fruitland, Idaho
Katgirl SILVER, Fruitland, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
You'll never catch it if you never let go


I cant think like this anymore
It's hard to say it but I love the bloody thoughts
that caress me
no I love it so much
bruises stirring my unconsciousness
the strap of my rifle snapping
my wrists turning it over and over
counting to 32
keep going
faster
64 drop-spins
bruises are what my hearts desire from this
relationship
oh why can't you be like my rifle
broken
painful
beautiful
jumble
beauty
you care about me
but your not inanimate


The author's comments:
this was an improv writing, but when i finished i really like it. I think it's good to write an unconscious piece, your mind can draw out something that you may not know is bothering you

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