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Warriors prayer

July 14, 2014
By 12gage PLATINUM, Genesee,
12gage PLATINUM, Genesee,
30 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"GODS OF WAR I CALL YOU, MY SWORD
IS BY MY SIDE.
I SEEK A LIFE OF HONR, FREE FROM
ALL FALSE PRIDE.
I WILL CRACK THE WHIP WITH A BOLD
MIGHTY HAIL.
COVER ME WITH DEATH IF I SHOULD
EVER FAIL.
"GLORY, MAJESTY, UNITY
HAIL, HAIL, HAIL. "


God of all, I call you.
My sword is at my side
I seek a life of honor, free from all
False pride
I will crack the whip, with a
Bone mighty hail
Cover me with death, if
I shall ever fail
Glory, Mastery, Unity
Hail, Hail, Hail.


The author's comments:
this is a copy of the real Prayer itself. but i made it into more a prayer for my grandparents u could say. because they are chistern and im not really one myself. so i thought i would make this one for them.

i need to know what u other chisterns think of this???? please i want to know what u think of this prayer of my. and i want to know the goods and the bad's of this??

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on Jul. 22 2014 at 5:06 pm
AllSoPlayfulWhenYouDemonize BRONZE, Richmond, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Our passion is our strength."
-Billie Joe Armstrong

I am a cristin and I though this was truly amazing! (:

on Jul. 20 2014 at 5:40 pm
___averylynn_____ SILVER, Waterford, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Look closely at the present you are constructing. It should look like the future you are dreaming. - Alice Walker.
What you wear is your billboard. So, what are you advertising?

Did you mean to write Chirstian?  If so, I am a Christian.  I thought it was really good, and I think it is a very effective prayer.  My take on it was that you (or whoever you wrote it for) were praying for a life in the eyes of God, and that he helps to strengthen you and your relationship.  I think it was really good.  I would say that the only thing I would change is the spacing.  But that is really a website thing.  I'm sure the spacing was there when you typed it, but the website makes it a bit weird.  I still loved it, overall.   

on Jul. 20 2014 at 5:20 pm
LittleMissLostInParadise GOLD, Cumberland, Virginia
19 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We live in a strange bubble"
-Brian Molko

Really good!