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Black Days

September 12, 2014
By Necromancer PLATINUM, Cedar Creek, Texas
Necromancer PLATINUM, Cedar Creek, Texas
21 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live life like There is no tomorrow"


The days are black

The nights are bright

my world

is upside down

Nothing is normal

not now

not ever

i am getting

very dizzy

blood rushing

to my head

i am

all alone, nobody

knows how i feel

nobody ever will.


The author's comments:

This poem comes from the dark side of my heart that nobody sees.


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Goldy97 GOLD said...
on Nov. 14 2014 at 8:44 pm
Goldy97 GOLD, Savona, New York
14 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is nothing worth hoping for when there is no hope left.

i liek this it reminds me of my work keep it up  

on Nov. 14 2014 at 8:43 pm
TheOceansBlackBird SILVER, Richmond, California
9 articles 14 photos 115 comments

Favorite Quote:
One persons craziness is another persons reality
-Tim Burton

and then there's this one
╭∩╮(︶︿︶)╭∩╮

Very deep. Touching and right to the point. I like how there seems to be a little bit of subtle rhyming at the end it makes the poem come together more.

on Oct. 3 2014 at 3:58 pm
DreamersJourney SILVER, Old Massett, Other
6 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The best thing you can do is the right thing, the next best thing you can do is the wrong thing. The worst thing you can do is nothing."
"Decide to have an attitude of gratitude, you can become bitter or better."
"beYOUtiful, everyone else is taken."

i appreciate the way you express yourself

on Oct. 2 2014 at 9:58 am
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 437 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

This is too relatable! I know exactly how u feel and I havwe felt and continue to feel this way myself! I will be herefor u! honest! take care!

on Sep. 26 2014 at 6:19 pm
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
53 articles 40 photos 204 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand up for what you believe in even if it means standing alone. -Andy Biersack
Sometimes you gotta fall before you can fly. -Kellin Quinn
You made me hate my own reflection. -Sleeping With Sirens

This is amazing! I have felt this way too for the longest time ever.

on Sep. 22 2014 at 1:30 pm
Crystallite BRONZE, Santa Elena, Other
2 articles 2 photos 347 comments
i like his poem. its so amazing, yet at the same time kinda sad, but the overall sadness does not take away from the awesomeness of your poem.! its really good, i like it a lot. i can also sorta kinda relate to it BUT I WUV IT! KEEP WRITTING WITTLE BRO :-D

on Sep. 19 2014 at 10:29 am
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

I can partly connect to this. It is so beautifully written. You really have a talent. It's short but very meanibgful. Keep it up 5/5 stars of course :D

on Sep. 18 2014 at 4:41 pm
PureDrawings BRONZE, Chandler, Arizona
3 articles 43 photos 230 comments
I agree. It very well writen and i can feel every word. I can tell you wrote from ur heart. I feel like this at times, and can really relate. You did a wonderful job :) well done

on Sep. 17 2014 at 9:10 am
bewareofbunnyrabbits SILVER, Winona, Minnesota
8 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Empty yourself and let the universe fill you." -Yogi Tea

I second that :) Keep writing; you are talented.

on Sep. 16 2014 at 5:00 pm
beAWESOMEstayAWESOME BRONZE, New York City, New York
3 articles 0 photos 133 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Work hard in silence and let your accomplishments make the noise."

its very sad but well written keep up the good work.

on Sep. 15 2014 at 11:53 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

I can connect; I've felt like this. And sometimes still do. Nothing is normal for me now, haha. But you're never alone. And true, know one will ever know how you feel. Because you're you, and no-one can be you. But you're not alone, know that. Geez Luis, you have a talent, I hope you know that. Cause you have a greatness in you. Thank you for sharing this!