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Just Your Everyday Typical Teen Love Poem

October 27, 2014
By Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
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Favorite Quote:
When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, "Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping." - Fred Rogers

Attemting to put my affection into a feasible call.

Perhaps a staccato

or legato

or anything at all.


Looking at you while nothing is said

is like a hymnal cue to 

the voices in my head.


"I must inquire what your future shall bear,

as decyphering naivety from the truth is 

a quite dilatory affair."


How often have I pondered our future further in time.

Is it not human for minds to wander forth and

suture threads of fate, sublime?


Whatever God may hold for us,

whatever our plan may be,

I hope that we're together, though I may be naive.

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This article has 3 comments.

RealRiter GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2015 at 8:40 pm
RealRiter GOLD, Astoria, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"I did not fail 101 times, but I simply found 101 ways that did not work." -Thomas Edison

Nice job. I see you have some pretty nice word choice as well. :)

on Feb. 15 2015 at 2:48 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
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Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

The word choice and flow is incredible. I see you hold yourself to very high standards as well.

Nobuo GOLD said...
on Nov. 26 2014 at 6:47 pm
Nobuo GOLD, Dio, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:

Keep spitting the hot fire