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Faces.

November 3, 2014
By hawksfanjulie PLATINUM, Burbank, Illinois
hawksfanjulie PLATINUM, Burbank, Illinois
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Faces
   of those who have sailed through my past with me still remain.
I
   have thrown some of them overboard, and rescued some from the darkest
   depths of menacing waters. They
Don’t
   necessarily know why I rescued them, and some do not even
Recognize
   that it was me that kept them from tumbling to the dangerous waters that
Surround
   their fate; and I’m not sure if it is
Me
   that has shifted their destiny from spiralling down the drain.


The author's comments:

My recent piece Faces pulled inspiration from a piece I had studied on Teenink.com by Z. Namu, entitled Dear Mom. This poem is very different from others that I have written in the past. I have recently started another Ellen Hopkins book that I started to read a while back but was not very fond of it, so I am giving it another shot, and as you can see my writing has varied.
Namu, Z. “Dear Mom.” Teen Ink. Accessed on November 3rd, 2014. Online Magazine.


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