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An Unfettered World
November 8, 2014
For the colors of nature
can only be orchestrated,
When we don't tack our genius.
Let us fly to the seamless sky,
and be independent birds,
Out of pound,
Without spleen
and invent, discover and create
a new untrammelled world
outside us, inside us...
© Brandon T., Manila, UT
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sarahcarp63 DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 13 2015 at 8:29 pm
Beautiful! My favorite line is "let us fly into the seamless sky." Its simple yet profound and it really paints a picture for the audience.
MatchaJasmine BRONZE said...
on Jan. 12 2015 at 5:01 am
Thank you for the comment!!
MatchaJasmine BRONZE said...
on Jan. 12 2015 at 5:00 am
Thanks!!! Your advice is really helpful.
itsyourmaingirl SILVER said...
on Jan. 11 2015 at 3:07 pm
I loved how effortless it was. You really have an amazing way of writing. I really enjoyed reading it.
David14 said...
on Jan. 11 2015 at 12:41 am
I like your style of writing. It's really interesting!
MatchaJasmine BRONZE said...
on Jan. 11 2015 at 12:13 am
Check out my new poem. I used your advice- it's a bit longer!
MatchaJasmine BRONZE said...
on Jan. 8 2015 at 6:40 am
Yeah! I liked them.
MatchaJasmine BRONZE said...
on Jan. 7 2015 at 4:45 am
Well I pretty much like watching Animal Planet and National Geographic. Nature always interests me. Seeing the increase in industrialization and harm to nature, I wanted spread awareness and give a message.
MatchaJasmine BRONZE said...
on Jan. 7 2015 at 4:38 am
It conveys that we shouldn't be limited. We should open up to new ideas, inspirations all around us. We can always be a learner, and nature can be our teacher. Primitive thinking always hampers progress. So thats what it means.
MatchaJasmine BRONZE said...
on Jan. 7 2015 at 4:19 am
I'll surely use your advice in my next poem. Thanks!
MatchaJasmine BRONZE said...
on Jan. 7 2015 at 4:16 am
Thanks everybody! Your advice is very helpful.
Thefanatasticagirlie101 SILVER said...
on Jan. 5 2015 at 2:23 pm
This describes the natural beauty of our world! Thanks for writing this very touching poem.
ansem_unlimited PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 5 2015 at 9:15 am
It's really beautiful, almost mind boggling in sorts. it represents (at least in my perspective) nature as this beautiful blank canvas without actually being blank at all... I love it
MysticMusic ELITE said...
on Jan. 3 2015 at 2:45 pm
This poem has beautifully worded the common phrase, think outside of the box, in a way that completely makes it yours. Here, it sounds like they're not only thinking outside the box, but breaking the box and escaping it. This was wonderfully done about both discovery as well as self-discovery. I think you've done an excellent job exploring the possibilities with phrasing this and can really take it to the next step. Great job!
BoobooBeetle DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 3 2015 at 9:12 am
This is a really wonderfully written poem! My only thing that I would say could be better is to make it a little longer to express more of what this is supposed to mean. Other than that, tremendous job!
Nature beautifies our lives, adding color to our horizons and sky.