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I can still hear you

November 14, 2014
By Hsnyder17 PLATINUM, Florissant, Missouri
Hsnyder17 PLATINUM, Florissant, Missouri
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Don't Get Discouraged until you build up the Courage.


  Even though you left me a year ago I can still hear you. I hear your laugh. I can hear you telling me your famous jokes to make me smile. I can still see you standing by our favorite oak tree at the top of the hill waiting for me. I can sill feel you standing by my side. You always had my back even when I didn't beileve in my self. I could count on you for anything anytime I needed you. You knew you could do the same. But I guess you forgot. That day you locked yourself in your room and wrote me the letter. The next day your mom told me the news and handed me the letter. I cried. And cried. And cried. I still cry even as I write this poem I cry. But then I hear you tell me we'll meet again one day. I hear you laugh. I see you smile. I go to our tree and sit and pray that one day we'll meet again. I miss you! I hope you can still see me smile. Hear me laugh. And feel me standing by your side.



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on Nov. 18 2014 at 6:15 pm
Hsnyder17 PLATINUM, Florissant, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Don't Get Discouraged until you build up the Courage.

I will!!! Thank you very much  

on Nov. 18 2014 at 3:09 pm
Nightingale74 PLATINUM, Beavercreek, Ohio
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&quot;When you need something to believe in, believe in yourself.&quot;<br /> &quot;A poem unwritten is only a thought; unshared, unsaid...&quot;

This is an absolutely beautiful poem...I love how full of emotion it is, and how honest and clear the voice is. Thank you for posting this poem!! Keep writing! :)

on Nov. 18 2014 at 11:02 am
Hsnyder17 PLATINUM, Florissant, Missouri
20 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don&#039;t Get Discouraged until you build up the Courage.

Thank you very much

on Nov. 18 2014 at 4:04 am
Abi-street GOLD, Birmingham, Other
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Try to be a rainbow in someone&rsquo;s cloud. - Maya Angelou

This is so sad and amazing! i really like this piece :) well done :)

on Nov. 17 2014 at 4:36 pm
Hsnyder17 PLATINUM, Florissant, Missouri
20 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don&#039;t Get Discouraged until you build up the Courage.

Thank you for the feedback

on Nov. 17 2014 at 11:10 am
asian_vegeta BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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It&#039;a Over 9000!!!!!!!!!

Very well written and very emotional poem, but format and emphasize specific parts ("I cried. And cried.") by making several paragraphs rather than one big paragraph. Other than that, well done. :)