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On Love MAG

January 2, 2009
By neshkuh GOLD, Lower Mainland, Other
neshkuh GOLD, Lower Mainland, Other
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Those lucky enough to find it
Will throw it away.
Those who cannot see it
Will scorn it.
And all the while
Someone out there
Will be wishing
For a chance at both.



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on Nov. 29 2009 at 4:24 pm
misbubbles93 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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I like this, very relateable

HélèneC said...
on Nov. 19 2009 at 12:15 am
LOL obviously the title is what the poeme is about... "On Love", the poeme is 'on love' hahah.

TigerLynn GOLD said...
on Nov. 7 2009 at 2:00 pm
TigerLynn GOLD, Maysville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"She walks in beauty,
Like the night of cloudless climes and starry skies;
And all that's best of dark and bright
Meet in her aspect and her eyes."
--Byron

great

its worded well

on Jul. 1 2009 at 9:34 pm
Elsie Dominguez BRONZE, Heber, California
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soo true :)

Lonleydandy said...
on Jun. 27 2009 at 2:40 am
O my gosh...I love this. I can SO relate. I don't have it, and I want it, but someone I knew had it from who I wanted it from, and they just THREW IT AWAY. I know why, but it was unfair......she knows it was to, and doesn't feel bad about it. I LOVED IT

on Jun. 15 2009 at 2:05 am
hunter cregger BRONZE, Roanoke, Virginia
3 articles 1 photo 5 comments
sad for me

on Jun. 11 2009 at 2:26 am
hopekristinex SILVER, Canton, Ohio
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so simple but captivating. i love poems like this.

on Jun. 8 2009 at 7:42 pm
delizabethl PLATINUM, Linesville, Pennsylvania
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It's great work, and I really like it. But I prefer longer poems. Plus, I can't see what the title has to do with the poem. No offense intended.

on Jun. 6 2009 at 2:25 am
SillySarah BRONZE, Covert, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Live today as if there is no tomorrow.

I love this. It is so cute.

on Jun. 2 2009 at 7:59 pm
Polly_4_Ever GOLD, Hubbard, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm Not Afraid of The Dark, I'm Afraid Of What's In It. I'm Not Afraid of Heights, I'm Afraid of Falling. I'm Not Afraid Of Love, I'm Afraid Of Not Being Loved Back.."

Okayy Woah. I've Heard this Before.. Like.. SOmewhere Else... I Don't Know Where.. But I Feel Like I've Heard It Somewhere Else...

on May. 29 2009 at 7:39 pm
HeavenCooley GOLD, Stillwater, Oklahoma
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this is so totally true!!

and you no sometimes im like that as well.

bubbles said...
on May. 22 2009 at 2:18 pm
i loved it it was great and it is soo true some people dont relize what they have till it is gone keep wrighting

on May. 16 2009 at 2:42 am
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

It's good and i like it but... you should find a way to work the title into the poem or work the title FROM the poem. Lots of people i know don't bother with the title. The feelings and descriptions are supposed to be IN the poems while the title is a way of complimenting it- making people want to read it.

on May. 15 2009 at 12:26 pm
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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it was pretty sweet i liked it. ;)

JustMe!! said...
on May. 10 2009 at 11:44 pm
I like this its simple yet nice. Good Job!! :]

on Apr. 26 2009 at 11:28 am
Kumanga DIAMOND, Bethel, Alaska
56 articles 0 photos 95 comments

Favorite Quote:
Always Accept nd love urself for who u are!

its pretty good......