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Love to cry

December 11, 2014
By WickedDreamer PLATINUM, Salem, Other
WickedDreamer PLATINUM, Salem, Other
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The legacy you leave is the one you live


I don't know why,
I'm loving to cry these days;
Maybe because,
The tears from my eyes
wash my face red with our memories;
Or maybe,
because they skate all through my aspect
till they reach my lips
whispering your name.



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Gagax SILVER said...
on Dec. 21 2014 at 2:05 pm
Gagax SILVER, Sugarland, Texas
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I love it a lot. Its a love poem, right? anyways advice: the skate verb didn't really make sense..because tears don't skate but if its intended then ignore me. :D and the aspect part too i didn't understand. I love it a lot! Can you give me feedback on my work? TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/745415/Moving-Day/

Watermelony said...
on Dec. 19 2014 at 2:53 pm
Watermelony, Lecalire, Iowa
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Hello. i really like your poem...