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Fragile Wings.

December 15, 2014
By hawksfanjulie PLATINUM, Burbank, Illinois
hawksfanjulie PLATINUM, Burbank, Illinois
23 articles 1 photo 4 comments

I posses all the feelings to drag myself back
to you, but I can’t seem to build up the courage
to let you in again.

I was fragile, scared and fallen. Afraid to spread my
wings again. When I broke my walls down to let
you in, you plucked the soft, delicate feathers that
made up my conscience; one by one.

Shivers run down my spine just thinking of
how close I let you get to break me down.
Destroying the only thing that made me
feel safe.
My ability to fly-torn.
The only affection I had now remains
only in the form of a dark, bruised scar
in between my shoulder blades.


The author's comments:

The inspiration I gathered for this piece came from the Fallen series. The idea of a fragile, fallen angel desperately wanting to love when only to be left heartbroken each time he/she feels the need to express affection, just pulls on my inner senses. 


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on Dec. 24 2014 at 1:29 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Will do, and to you too as well. Merry Christmas. :)

on Dec. 23 2014 at 9:39 am
hawksfanjulie PLATINUM, Burbank, Illinois
23 articles 1 photo 4 comments
Thank you so much, I'm thrilled that you enjoy my writing! Please check out some of my other pieces and tell me what you think. Have a wonderful day and holiday. :)

on Dec. 23 2014 at 9:38 am
hawksfanjulie PLATINUM, Burbank, Illinois
23 articles 1 photo 4 comments
Thank you for the positive feedback! It is greatly appreciated. :)

on Dec. 22 2014 at 7:19 pm
M.G.Causly SILVER, Compton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"After all this time?"
"Always," said Snape.

wow......wow...i cant even right now......amazing, beautiful, breathtaking. such pain and agony its crazy....wow

on Dec. 22 2014 at 5:26 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Oh, wow. Pssh, posh my applesauce. This is absolutely, breath-taking and just beautiful. It's just filled with beauty and emotion and descriptiveness. And movement. It's just beautiful. Because this is how I sometimes feel too. This is one of favorite favorites. You are an amazing and wonderful and talented and beautiful writer person, filled with talent and greatness and light and beauty; and so much more. Thank you so much, my friend! For sharing this. :) I look forward to reading more of your work. Thank you, again. :)