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Same?
December 16, 2014
Every day is the same. I wake I dress I go to school like the rest. It all just seems the same, it just makes things incredibly lame. That is why I try my best to be unique even though I may seem mystique.
© Katie C., Libertyville, IA
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NymeriaWaters PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 25 2015 at 6:20 pm
I really like the idea for this poem. Adding more verses would bring out the theme more, especially if the verses were all about practically the same thing. This poem definitely has potential to be really interesting.
SomeoneMagical PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 23 2015 at 10:50 am
I liked your use of ryhmes and similes and how the speaker is describing that his/her day is The same. This is a very original piece of writing. But I would suggest maybe making it longer...and adding a few more details. It was a little drab and plain and I couldn't quite get any pictures...please add more descriptive words and sentences. Other than that I think this is a pretty good quality piece.
To start, I feel that you should add more to this poem. The tone that is set in this stanza suggests a personal and emotionally based narrative. You could build off that concept and establish a theme that revolves around identity. To be honest I don't know much about poems, but I feel there is more to be explored in this piece. The poem has a solid start by establishing how monotonous life is, but it could be even stronger by expanding on that idea in a more creative way.
I just felt like writing it nothing really inspired me, I just felt like sharing it nothing really stands out but I don't see how it hurts if I post it. (Wrote it a couple of years ago)