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They Follow Through

February 2, 2015
By mga1231 BRONZE, Canton, Michigan
mga1231 BRONZE, Canton, Michigan
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
there's always tomorrow


I am only myself

I have a double tongue 

which I am slowly beginning to lose

My mind is perpendicular 

my thoughts always follow through

Although my outs and ins tend to differ

the generality of my being remains the same

My scarves flow with color and individuality

The sum of my experiences

do not equal me

My fears do not define me

yet they always follow through


The author's comments:

This piece is about life, how everyone has their own personal ups and downs, how people change throughout life, but they're still who they were and who they will always be. Most importantly, it's about not stressing about being who others see you as or who others want you to be but only who you are. 


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mga1231 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 15 2015 at 1:13 pm
mga1231 BRONZE, Canton, Michigan
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
there's always tomorrow

Thank you for the feedback @Amai-kun i appreciate it:)

on Feb. 15 2015 at 3:06 am
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

I think this is very good. One way you could improve it is by making it 'flow' better, but that's only my opinion.