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Who I was is Not who I am (a reply to faces from my past)

February 2, 2015
By The_DoctorDonna PLATINUM, Anytown, Iowa
The_DoctorDonna PLATINUM, Anytown, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is impossible. The word itself says 'I'm Possible'"


Who I was is Not who I am
You are not Me.
Perhaps at one time,
so long ago,
I was You.
But no longer.
Who I was is Not who I am
I am not You
You are not Me
and never again shall I be
So just go away and leave me.
Who I was is Not who I am
goodbye little girl
I miss you.



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on Apr. 13 2015 at 9:16 pm
BeautyWhispers PLATINUM, Nevada City, California
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Favorite Quote:
Be Yourself, Be Unique, Be Me. :) - By BeautyWhispers

I think it's great! Very nice work. It did confuse me at first though, I had to read it a few times to really get it, and that intrigued me all the more:)

on Apr. 3 2015 at 5:32 pm
ceceliajsavoy BRONZE, Tadley, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'We are just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl, year after year. Running over the same old ground, what have we found? The same old fear; wish you were here' - Pink Floyd

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A very neat poem. I love how abstract it is, and the capitalisation of the 'n' for not really emphasizes it, Well done!