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Telling Day

February 8, 2015
By mga1231 BRONZE, Canton, Michigan
mga1231 BRONZE, Canton, Michigan
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
there's always tomorrow


Can we have a telling day? 

A day to share our secrets? 

A day to pur our hearts out

A day to have no weakness?

 

Can we have a telling day? 

A day to share our thoughts? 

I'll open up my mind

seperate all my knots.

 

Can we have a telling day?

A day to share our fears?

There won't be any worries

there won't be any tears.

 

Can we have a telling day?

A day to share our lies?

To confess our fibs, every one

tie together all lose ties.

 

Can we have a telling day? 

Can we have one, please? 

I really really need one,

I'm begging on my knees. 

 

I guess we'll have a telling day 

I guess it will be soon

don't worry, it'll be helpful

like the tide is with the moon


The author's comments:

This piece is about trust and opening up even when you want to shut others out.


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mga1231 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 13 2015 at 9:16 am
mga1231 BRONZE, Canton, Michigan
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
there's always tomorrow

Thank you so much @CaseyChickenWang I appreciate your comment so much and you really understand the depths of my poem:) I read your work "Alone" and it was amazing, the tribute was perfect and it put the entire story of Alice in Wonderland in a new light for me, so thank you!! Please write more:)

on Feb. 12 2015 at 6:40 pm
CaseyChickenWang SILVER, McDonough,
7 articles 2 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No one likes half-jinglers! Jingle all the way!" - Shelley McNeight
"You don't get what you deserve, you get what you negotiate." - GSUMUN

I am absolutely in love with this. It's short and simple but it conveys a desire that lies within us all - the desire to have people read us and accept us as we are. I especially love the verse "separate all my knots." Now, Can we please please PLEASE have a telling day?