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February 28, 2015
By Tamie GOLD, Sonora, California
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Tamie GOLD, Sonora, California
18 articles 2 photos 61 comments

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"if you can be anyone just be you unless you could be Buffy Summers then be Buffy Summers"

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Love is an emotion that is so stong it hurts,
Love is an emotion that you can't explian,
Love is our band-aids in this world,
Love can be our medicine to sadness or lonelyness,
Love is powerful,
Love is amazing,
Without it, our world wouldn't be the same,
Love is something you thought you could imaigne,
When really it is unimaganible,
What is it about this emotion, that makes people do cazy things?
You  don't get choose when love comes it just does.
                            I don't know.
That is just love.

© Rebecca B., Marietta, GA

The author's comments:

This piece was inspired by people falling in love.  It was also inspired my boyfriend.

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SomeoneMagical PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 25 2015 at 3:55 pm
SomeoneMagical PLATINUM, Durham, New Hampshire
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Interesting, but as @Letterstojuliet said, it flows wierd because of commas. But otherwise its great and I was touched. You're a great poet with a lot of talent!
Tamie GOLD said...
on May. 5 2015 at 9:28 am
Tamie GOLD, Sonora, California
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Thank you both.
BeautyWhispers PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 8 2015 at 7:23 pm
BeautyWhispers PLATINUM, Nevada City, California
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That's cute, I LOVE it! ;)
Letterstojuliet GOLD said...
on Apr. 4 2015 at 8:01 pm
Letterstojuliet GOLD, Bremerton, Washington
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I love it, the flow is weird because of the commas. but its really good.