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My Mother
March 8, 2015
When I opened my eyes,
The first person whom I saw was my Mom.
From the moment I saw her till now,
I love her.
My love for her and hers for me is a never-ending love.
My Mom is the sun without which,
My sky is incomplete.
My Mom is the moon without whom,
My nights would be dark.
My mom is the air without which,
I can’t breathe.
My mom is the reason,
For the smile on my face.
My mom is the one who has shown me this world.
My mom is so special,
That she can’t be expressed in words.
My mom is the world, in which I live,
My mom is the one without whom I can’t imagine my life.
© Natalie M., Glendale, AZ
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This article has 2 comments.
I think the main problems here are the grammar issues. For example, you don't need to write "My mom is so special, that she can't be expressed in words." You can simply say "My mom is too special to be expressed in words." Also, you don't need to use bold unless there's a specific word or phrase you need to highlight. Other than that, all you need to do is avoid unnecessary capitalization.
My mother is my first and eternal love.My love for her cannot be expressed in words.I can't Live without her.