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Personal Style

April 8, 2015
By Scorpio07 SILVER, Hertfordshire, Other
Scorpio07 SILVER, Hertfordshire, Other
5 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are many launguages around the world, but a smile speaks them all - Unknown


The constant battle for perfection

spreads fast like an infection.

When ever-changing society's requirements pile in,

casting visions of uniformity to win.

To survive, one must compete with joined forces.

Challenges such as trends, trust, truth endorses.

 

But me? I believe in personal style.

Where complete outfits consist of smiles.

Opposed to the half-hearted smirks, or the pouted lips,

I'll eat my food, not stave my hips.

I will not, do not act 'easy.'

Nor do I dress supposudly sleazy.

 

I'm for me, live selfishly, wear argyll.

I believe in personal style.


The author's comments:

This was inspired by our society, and the whole big deal about being in a pack of identical fish.  It is important to be yourself, particularly with the sterotype that out generation has been given.


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on Sep. 12 2015 at 10:52 pm
EmmaClaire0823 GOLD, Bay Minette, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you wish to see in the world."

I meant could've gone deeper though. Sorry about the typo.

on Sep. 12 2015 at 9:09 pm
EmmaClaire0823 GOLD, Bay Minette, Alabama
13 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you wish to see in the world."

I like the overall message of the poem though I think you could've conveyed it more creatively. You addressed a very important topic. I love that. I do think you've gone deeper. Good job!

on Apr. 16 2015 at 8:17 am
Scorpio07 SILVER, Hertfordshire, Other
5 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are many launguages around the world, but a smile speaks them all - Unknown

Thank you so much! I hope that you enjoyed reading it. :)

on Apr. 16 2015 at 8:17 am
Scorpio07 SILVER, Hertfordshire, Other
5 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are many launguages around the world, but a smile speaks them all - Unknown

Thank you so much! This really means alot and I appreciate the time that you spent reading and commenting on it.

Beila BRONZE said...
on Apr. 12 2015 at 2:40 am
Beila BRONZE, Palo Alto, California
3 articles 0 photos 516 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The coldest winter I ever spent was a summer in San Francisco." -Mark Twain

I love the rhyme, I love the voice, I love the fact that this is maybe the first time I've ever loved that the author forced me to look up a word.... Did I mention that I love this poem? From "complete outfits" to "supposedly sleazy" is pure gold. Yes! You've captured it perfectly.

A-C-Y BRONZE said...
on Apr. 10 2015 at 10:36 am
A-C-Y BRONZE, New Taipei City, Other
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I loved your work! The way you showed how people in this generation fight so hard to fit in with out realizing that they've forgotten who they are. It did a great job of reminding me to be myself and I bet it'll do so in other people's cases. Good job on this piece! I hope to read other pieces of yours soon!;)