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My Greatest Wish

June 17, 2015
By Adia16 GOLD, Nampa, Idaho
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Adia16 GOLD, Nampa, Idaho
16 articles 7 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sing like no one's listening, Dance like no ones watching, Love like you've never been hurt."-Unknown

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To see him is my greatest wish
For my eyes will see
What as glorious as he
Brighter much Brighter
He will be as he stands right before me
If this be reality
Then I must be worthy for eternity
Hand in hand
Step by step
A lamp to fill by drop
Until it reaches to the top
Light to show to preserve a soul
To share love and care
For you and for me
So let us together journey to eternity
Struggle by trail depression to
diminish as I have Christ with me.
 

© Ricky P., Natchitoches, LA

The author's comments:

This is my orginal peice from a while ago, the photo is not my orginal work. I couldn't figure out how to submit my own. 

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ThisEmilyDa1 SILVER said...
on Jul. 8 2015 at 11:54 pm
ThisEmilyDa1 SILVER, BF, New Mexico
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only a life lived for others is a life worthwhile<br /> -Albert Instien<br /> the only person you should try to be better than is the person you were yesterday.

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This amazing work, keep it up. I would really appreciate it if you checked out my poem and commented, I have two orther stories as well and I will look at your work too.
Izzy777 SILVER said...
on Jun. 26 2015 at 1:53 pm
Izzy777 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
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Wow, this is beautiful (:
NarutosimG GOLD said...
on Jun. 24 2015 at 11:45 am
NarutosimG GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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very smooth and emotional it really a good post.
Blackjack. GOLD said...
on Jun. 23 2015 at 12:08 pm
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This is great. Nice work!
Sunshine2420 SILVER said...
on Jun. 22 2015 at 12:00 pm
Sunshine2420 SILVER, Unknown, Other
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A smile hides everything.

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Its amazingly written...I ♥ it :)