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My Greatest Wish

June 17, 2015
By Adia16 GOLD, Nampa, Idaho
Adia16 GOLD, Nampa, Idaho
16 articles 7 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sing like no one's listening, Dance like no ones watching, Love like you've never been hurt."-Unknown

To see him is my greatest wish
For my eyes will see
What as glorious as he
Brighter much Brighter
He will be as he stands right before me
If this be reality
Then I must be worthy for eternity
Hand in hand
Step by step
A lamp to fill by drop
Until it reaches to the top
Light to show to preserve a soul
To share love and care
For you and for me
So let us together journey to eternity
Struggle by trail depression to
diminish as I have Christ with me.

The author's comments:

This is my orginal peice from a while ago, the photo is not my orginal work. I couldn't figure out how to submit my own. 

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on Jul. 8 2015 at 11:54 pm
ThisEmilyDa1 SILVER, BF, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
only a life lived for others is a life worthwhile
-Albert Instien
the only person you should try to be better than is the person you were yesterday.

This amazing work, keep it up. I would really appreciate it if you checked out my poem and commented, I have two orther stories as well and I will look at your work too.

Izzy777 SILVER said...
on Jun. 26 2015 at 1:53 pm
Izzy777 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
9 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I always wonder why birds stay in one place when they can fly anywhere around the world. But then I ask myself the same question."

Wow, this is beautiful (:

on Jun. 24 2015 at 11:45 am
NarutosimG GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
10 articles 2 photos 55 comments
very smooth and emotional it really a good post.

on Jun. 23 2015 at 12:08 pm
Blackjack. GOLD, Suffolk, Virginia
13 articles 0 photos 94 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Take a lesson from "the Greatest Man That Ever Lived," Austin Aries. The ambition and vision of one depends on how bad@ss they look in sunglasses." - Me, 2017

"Who is this Jose, and why is he always being denied?" - Corey Graves, 2016

This is great. Nice work!

on Jun. 22 2015 at 12:00 pm
Sunshine2420 SILVER, Unknown, Other
9 articles 0 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
A smile hides everything.

Its amazingly written...I ♥ it :)