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The forest eyes

July 19, 2015
By SomeoneMagical PLATINUM, Durham, New Hampshire
SomeoneMagical PLATINUM, Durham, New Hampshire
22 articles 1 photo 259 comments

Beneath the fallen feather leaves

The sun shrinks down beneath the trees

Falling down

Like rings of fire

Come the Rays, piercing

golden and


They strike the


Crystal skies

Brightening the clouds

Visible to the eyes

Creating warped

Patterns on water

Delighting the eyes

Of the passing


The forest


Brimming with life

Golden, pure

A great delight

One of nature's

Many treasures.

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This article has 4 comments.

kayliee BRONZE said...
on Jul. 30 2015 at 2:43 pm
kayliee BRONZE, Cininnati, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"And if you can't see anything beautiful about yourself, get a better mirror, look a little closer, stare a little longer because there's something inside you that made you keep trying, despite everyone who told you to quit..'they were wrong'.

this is very beautiful. I was wondering if you could give me some feedback on my poem mystery girl?

Cam_is_Away said...
on Jul. 24 2015 at 5:32 pm
Cam_is_Away, Non, California
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You use imagery very well in your poem. I can see the sunrise. Or at least, that's what it seems to be to me. Great job :-)

on Jul. 22 2015 at 1:04 am
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Hold fast and keep your head up high for life will pass right by you like a speeding bird if you don't acknowledge it- Charles Moorer III (me)

very pretty, i have nothing bad to say about it, but still, wonderful. It's basically a change of seasons in my eyes lol

on Jul. 21 2015 at 6:41 pm
SomeoneMagical PLATINUM, Durham, New Hampshire
22 articles 1 photo 259 comments
Feedback is appreciated; thanks.