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Even/If

January 4, 2016
By Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P


but even if i cry, would it make a change?

even if i die, would it save me for the rest of today?

and if i tried, could i take everything back to okay?

it’s too late to come home, anyway.


The author's comments:

More Kylo poetry. I'm internally screaming.

 

[Note-yes, that's a reference to the lines "Come home" and "It's too late" from the movie.]


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on Jan. 13 2016 at 9:41 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

Thank you for commenting! I'm trying to write longer poems, but I feel like I just can't get the meaning to stick around ;~;

Saturn. BRONZE said...
on Jan. 11 2016 at 10:15 pm
Saturn. BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"The mind is better than the sword"
-Unknown (I'm too lazy to look it up)
"All warfare is based on deception"
-Sun Tzu

Awesome, a bit short, but cool.