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Frostbite and Flames

February 2, 2016
By TikiTobi PLATINUM, Traverse City, Michigan
TikiTobi PLATINUM, Traverse City, Michigan
20 articles 1 photo 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
I got a ton of work to do. A SKELEton.
I need to put a little more BackBONE into it.
I deserve PUNishment.
Nyeh heh heh!


I was once a part of you, lost in your feelings.
I was once part of your heart and soul.
I can’t stop them now.
You and me
We had a long history
But now you are never there
I was your key.
The empty feeling surrounds me
Like a snowflake in time.
The icicles of life drip onto the cold ground
Every second meeting it's end.
But when we meet
twas the time I felt happy
you filled me with flames
to melt the cold.
When you left again,
I left my soul
In the lake
and it's already covered
in frosted feelings.
Every time I feel,
I lose control
of my heart,
and I bleed melodies.
And like that little snowflake,
I fell
From the sky
To the Land of The Forgotten.
I was wandering
fields of grey
shadows of guilt
endless notes on a
broken melody.
When I emerged
from the end of
existence
I felt the fire again
without you here.
I felt as though
the light was becoming one
with me,
like I was consuming the
Flames of Eternity
and that feeling stayed with me,
for I was not
but a mere mind
of imagination.


The author's comments:

Do not let the darkness consume you, because a brighter light is waiting at the end.


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on Mar. 9 2016 at 11:18 am
TikiTobi PLATINUM, Traverse City, Michigan
20 articles 1 photo 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
I got a ton of work to do. A SKELEton.
I need to put a little more BackBONE into it.
I deserve PUNishment.
Nyeh heh heh!

Thank you!

on Mar. 8 2016 at 10:33 pm
kosmokitty BRONZE, ..., Colorado
1 article 0 photos 3 comments

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I'm all fired up now! ;)

Wow! This is really good :O and amazing! This makes me feel like writing a short One-Shot :) This is amazing! I cant wait to hear more from you