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Our First Time

October 23, 2017
By Awardwinner GOLD, Hartland, Wisconsin
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Our first time, I feel like I’m high.
Your heart sounds like a graceful song.
Your eyes taste like chocolate.
Your smile smells like flowers in spring. 
Now I’m staring at your gravestone
remembering our first time.

© Julia K., Old Tappan, NJ

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This is written in a Korean poetic form called sijo.

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