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October 23, 2017
By sheinitz SILVER, Okauchee, Wisconsin
sheinitz SILVER, Okauchee, Wisconsin
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Quickly I rise, surrounded by darkness, and silver sparkly stars.
My breathing slows, my head spins—like planets, circling me.
I fainted...the black fades and I’m surrounded by bright blue skies.


The author's comments:

this is written in a korean poetric form called sijo


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