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Disappointment
June 3, 2009
The endless rainfall
Shattering my hope of sun
Forming mud puddles.
© Brandon W., Redwood City, CA
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JackCuncannan BRONZE said...
on Apr. 27 2018 at 1:28 pm
Quality poem
Buttercupz said...
on May. 22 2012 at 9:36 pm
Short, simple and Fantastic!!!! is all i gotta say. Nice job :)
AMAWHI said...
on May. 22 2012 at 10:11 am
I like this haiku a lot! It reminds me the days that there was rain when I needed the sunshine to make me happy. Good job, I really like it. I t brought me sorrow and memories good and bad.
dia.dreamer GOLD said...
on Sep. 1 2011 at 1:03 pm
my friend also feels that haiku are incomplete/short. but that's the whole point. to bring lots of meaning into few but powerful words. the rest is upto our imagination.
love the haiku. you did a really awesome job. keep writing. :)
DragonMaster66.6 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 19 2010 at 11:35 am
That was very good, and this also brought me disappoinment. Not the haiku itself but rather the haiku. What I'm trying to say is that you chose a good title as well. :)
GreenLover SILVER said...
on Sep. 14 2010 at 10:27 am
nicely written. so little words but big meaning.
you should check out some of my new work. rate, commet, critize. thanks!
Blue4indigo PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 23 2010 at 11:34 am
Great poem-so little words, yet such vivid pictures. 5/5 stars!
By the way, would you read some of my stories, rate, and critisize? Thanks.
cmCampbell SILVER said...
on Aug. 1 2010 at 12:29 pm
I love the idea of rain shattering hopes! I can really see it! Great job! Please check out my article entitled True Blood! :D Thank you
yazhira_saphira BRONZE said...
on Jul. 10 2010 at 9:46 pm
nice haiku...good meaning.but personally, I really don't like haikus. They're to short to be appreciated.haha.
ShenelleCrystal SILVER said...
on Jun. 18 2010 at 3:14 pm
That was so good ! Don't ever stop writing :)
Please come and check out my poems [comment or rate] Thank u
Patience97 PLATINUM said...
on May. 5 2010 at 2:37 pm
I like the way I can relate to your poem.
ParamoreFan131 said...
on Mar. 22 2010 at 8:08 pm
Wow love it :) Fantastic job!
Hope_Princess BRONZE said...
on Sep. 2 2009 at 2:47 pm
This has such clear imagery and I could almost see the rain streaming down my windows.
Keep writing!
Keep writing!
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