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Mirrored Nights
September 8, 2009
Big skies, starry nights
Looking up with hopeful eyes
Close yet far away
Drifting from above
Dreams with possibilities
Screaming silent words
Bright hues shining through
Starry skies filling your eyes
With reality
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This article has 8 comments.
DiamondsIntheGrass GOLD said...
on Aug. 12 2010 at 5:05 pm
i love the flow. but i dont get it.
WickedStarcatcher DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 12 2010 at 8:38 am
I thought that this poem was beautiful and that you have a great understanding of language use! Keep writing! :)
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 16 2009 at 8:11 pm
one word: awesome!
anonymousjulie BRONZE said...
on Oct. 10 2009 at 11:26 pm
thanks, and I did have a completely different beginning but I counted all my syllables wrong so I had to rewrite it. [:
and the middle section bothers me, if I could have the second line as the top line and the top line as the second I'd like it a lot better.
and the middle section bothers me, if I could have the second line as the top line and the top line as the second I'd like it a lot better.
I love haikus, especially yours!
The mood you create is one of my favourites. (: I can't really describe it, and that's good, because your poetry described it! The last one is my favourite...it just has a good ring to it. I'll say one negative thing to be constructive--haha--I think you're creative enough to think of less popular adjectives then you used in the first one, but of course then it wouldn't be a haiku...
Altogether, I love your work. Please keep writing! (:
♥♥ Michaela
The mood you create is one of my favourites. (: I can't really describe it, and that's good, because your poetry described it! The last one is my favourite...it just has a good ring to it. I'll say one negative thing to be constructive--haha--I think you're creative enough to think of less popular adjectives then you used in the first one, but of course then it wouldn't be a haiku...
Altogether, I love your work. Please keep writing! (:
♥♥ Michaela
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