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A Horse's Run

September 8, 2009
By thundergirl BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
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As I run, feel strong
Wind amongst my long sleek mane
I'm walking on air

I feel like I'm flying
High up in our sky. It's
Like lying on a cloud

Now it's time to stop
My family is waiting for my return
I shall run to my home

© Elaina B., Waterloo, NY

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a passion for animals expecially horses is what inspired me to do this poem
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This article has 8 comments.

Amberocks:) said...
on Oct. 11 2011 at 4:53 pm
its true its not but its still good. even if its not 5 7 5
sarahconway GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2011 at 10:35 am
sarahconway GOLD, Hillsboro, Kentucky
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I like this, I really do, but it isn't a haiku.  Just thought I would let you know.
DragonMaster66.6 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 15 2010 at 10:38 am
DragonMaster66.6 BRONZE, Washougal, Washington
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neither, it's a poem
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on Jan. 31 2010 at 5:47 pm
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Love it! Good secret description. I like it:)!
Katrap BRONZE said...
on Oct. 23 2009 at 5:03 pm
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Nice. I can picture the horse running. Is it wild, or tame?
Elena Lee R. said...
on Sep. 30 2009 at 2:21 pm
I loved this poem. Is it about horses? i also liked the pciure that goes with it. Is it about a horse?
halls said...
on Sep. 22 2009 at 7:25 pm
I love how the way the horse is discribed running
blank said...
on Sep. 17 2009 at 9:04 pm
i love this story it is the best