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Walking Through the Woods MAG
September 17, 2009
My feet hit the snow as
I walk, the wind blows, homeless
Through trees and my heart
© Megan M., Ocala, FL
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MysticMusic ELITE said...
on Mar. 7 2015 at 1:56 pm
Beautiful and solemn haiku. The imagery and meanings behind are so full of different meanings. I love this.
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 30 2014 at 12:28 pm
Hey firefly116! If you're still looking for pure form sonnnets or Haiku to read. Read some of my newest. I think the new ones of mine got VERY properly categorized. At first I used to get so annoyed by bad categorization on here too, but then I learned to live with it. Anyway. I'd love it if you read and told me if you like my sonnet umm wait let me name one for you so its not an agony for you to find one. Oh there's two new ones. "Time: the B*tch" and "welcome winter, my love". Not that new but new in my posts :P The rest are mostly in Haiku form.
PandaBearLouise16 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 8 2012 at 7:33 pm
short but pretty
PandaBearLouise16 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 8 2012 at 7:33 pm
short but pretty
Blaine Weiss said...
on Nov. 8 2012 at 4:02 pm
I really like this poem. It is written very well. Great job!
gabbru said...
on May. 16 2012 at 8:08 am
I liked this Haiku. It was very dark but very pretty at the same time. It all fit together very well. Nice job!(:
XpaintmeablueskyX BRONZE said...
on Nov. 22 2011 at 10:59 am
i love it :)
dia.dreamer GOLD said...
on Aug. 18 2011 at 10:17 pm
as everyone else already said, the wind being homeless is just awesome. I loved this haiku...keep writing...and check my poems out too. :)
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 13 2011 at 3:14 pm
Could you look at my haiku poems Doubt, All Alone, and Seeing Your Soul, please? Thank you!
JamesBLaurie SILVER said...
on Apr. 16 2011 at 6:37 pm
I love the way that you reffered to the wind as homeless, it's great
pickle*eater said...
on Dec. 5 2010 at 6:35 pm
i realy lik the idea but haikus r soupesed to be 5,7,5 and u hav 6,7,5 sysabless other than that its good
DreamInspired GOLD said...
on Aug. 17 2010 at 9:40 am
I really liked the idea of homeless wind. An area for improvement would be to remove the as in the first line. With the as it is not the correct format for a haiku. The last line was worded beautifully. Great job.
Ninten1992 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 12 2010 at 12:57 pm
Good poem. I really like the second line. :)
...imhere... BRONZE said...
on May. 21 2010 at 10:11 am
wow....your good, but yeah remove the as.
Snookums said...
on May. 21 2010 at 9:59 am
ur poem l00k g00d.
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