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A Best Friend's Test

September 16, 2009
By Backfoot_Trevor SILVER, Acworth, Georgia
Backfoot_Trevor SILVER, Acworth, Georgia
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I am losing him
The church has been recruiting
Is he happier?

Memories are hope
The traits we shared are fleeting
Are my hopes futile?

So quickly he changed
I never thought it'd happen
She has ruined him

He has ruined her
The feelings all forgotten

Each traumatic memory
Were they worth it?

A love found elsewhere
One of few loves I can't share
Forgetting himself

Rebirth is a death
He died and yet still he clings
I am growing tired

The reasons are null
Though he believes he is found
I am losing him.

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Gymnast1 said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 11:23 am
Gymnast1, Waukesha, Wisconsin
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This is really good! I like how you showed that love can be such a good thing at one point then it can totally change after an amount of time.

Lyrics SILVER said...
on Oct. 19 2011 at 1:13 am
Lyrics SILVER, Nelson, Other
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Favorite Quote:
You know your in love when you cant fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams ~ Dr.Suess


cheer1018 said...
on Jan. 6 2011 at 12:31 pm
cheer1018, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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Great haiku.  I read it a few times to fully understand it but once i did i though it was amazing! It can relate to a lot of people because im sure they have felt the same way.  Even though i can't relate, i think you did a great job because i was still moved.

Us :) said...
on Sep. 30 2009 at 3:06 pm
I really liked this piece of writing, even though it did take a minute to figure out. it all flowed together! It was pashinyish. :P

on Sep. 27 2009 at 5:50 pm
JenniferB. SILVER, Harvey, Louisiana
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This is very great its actually a haiku other than like other people on this website in the haiku section

on Sep. 25 2009 at 12:39 pm
HeavenCooley GOLD, Stillwater, Oklahoma
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this is good.

very big words really make a great peice of writing.