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December 17, 2009
By bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
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bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

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&quot;The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent.&quot;<br /> &quot;You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel.&quot;

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It's not what you think;
You're never alone in this
I promise;

I have learned a lot;
Know much about little things;
Promise you I'll stay

Alone, we are strong;
Together, we are complete;
We should work as one

Despite all of this
I promise I won't let go;
Our bind is too strong

Without any doubt
Two is lot better than one;
I promise you it

© Kevin G., Atlanta, GA

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awesomelyme GOLD said...
on Jul. 16 2012 at 9:24 pm
awesomelyme GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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Akthough the truth may hurt, not knowing is the worst kind of punishment.

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that was a really great poem. i enjoyed it. but in the first stanze yu only used 3 syllables rather than 5.
irishlass317 said...
on May. 11 2012 at 6:05 pm
irishlass317, Jefferson City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I asked Jesus &#039;How much do you love me?&#039; He answered &#039;This much.&#039; And He streched out His arms and died.&quot;

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I love it! It was sooooooo good
!!! :D <3

 

bamboom212 PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 23 2012 at 5:49 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent.&quot;<br /> &quot;You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel.&quot;

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thank you. yeah, i noticed a couple mistakes like that after I submitted >.<
ManekiNeko SILVER said...
on Dec. 9 2011 at 8:58 am
ManekiNeko SILVER, Cincinnati, Ohio
8 articles 1 photo 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It is better to keep your mouth shut and be thought a fool than to open it and prove it to be true.&quot;

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Third line in the first stanza has only 3 syllables.
bamboom212 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 22 2011 at 7:50 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent.&quot;<br /> &quot;You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel.&quot;

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thank u so much;D
bamboom212 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 22 2011 at 7:50 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent.&quot;<br /> &quot;You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel.&quot;

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aw thank u! im so glad u liked it:)
whateverjuliet BRONZE said...
on Apr. 11 2011 at 8:00 pm
whateverjuliet BRONZE, Miami, Florida
3 articles 3 photos 89 comments

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true love never dies,it only gets stronger with time.

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love love love it!
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Mar. 20 2011 at 12:24 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1979 comments

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Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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dawww how sweet ^^ Awesome Job!!! :D
bamboom212 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 20 2011 at 1:56 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent.&quot;<br /> &quot;You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel.&quot;

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thankk u. it really means alott=]
Mermaidmissy SILVER said...
on Feb. 10 2011 at 3:02 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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I really like your poems so much. It was very moving and very pretty at the same time. I think you should keep up the good work to. 
bamboom212 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 8 2010 at 8:36 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent.&quot;<br /> &quot;You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel.&quot;

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aww thankk u so much. it meanz alottt(:
CammyLashay SILVER said...
on Oct. 17 2010 at 3:22 pm
CammyLashay SILVER, Java, Virginia
9 articles 0 photos 31 comments

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Failure is not for me.

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loved it no more can be said =)
bamboom212 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 29 2010 at 5:46 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent.&quot;<br /> &quot;You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel.&quot;

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sure! id luv 2. thxx 4 takin the time 2 read:)
ShenelleCrystal SILVER said...
on Jun. 28 2010 at 11:25 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

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Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] &hearts;

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that was great ! please come check out my work :)
bamboom212 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 6 2010 at 9:42 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent.&quot;<br /> &quot;You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel.&quot;

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lol aw thxxx everyone 4 da commntz!!!
SissyPooh said...
on May. 12 2010 at 12:09 pm
iireally lyk dhzz!!! OMq iireally du,,,keep writinq more(ihm seriousz)
Vampwriter93 GOLD said...
on Mar. 21 2010 at 8:55 pm
Vampwriter93 GOLD, Lawrence, Kansas
19 articles 0 photos 6 comments

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i dont have one...i use so many and i get them from movies and tv shows

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i love this...i can relate to that so well
bamboom212 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 3:03 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent.&quot;<br /> &quot;You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel.&quot;

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ha thank u! im glad u can relate ;)
Peace420 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 12:46 pm
Peace420 BRONZE, Williston, Florida
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I love this Dude!!!!! Really awesome. It reminds me of my family.....
bamboom212 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 18 2010 at 8:21 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent.&quot;<br /> &quot;You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel.&quot;

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ha sorry. the two is lot better than one is intentional, but not the i promise lol. thanxx :))