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Dance With Me, Soft Wind

December 27, 2009
By 9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
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Would you like to dance
With me under the dark sky
Just the stars and us

We’ll be together
Forever as long as you
Don’t ever leave me

Cradle me gently,
Soft wind, and promise me that
You’ll never let go.


The author's comments:
I was feeling nostalgic about my fast disappearing childhood, and how I used to feel so carefree. In a sense I used to feel like the wind, blowing any which way I wanted but with a purpose.

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kellyisgr8 said...
on Jan. 30 2010 at 12:03 pm
kellyisgr8, Fairfax, Virginia
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i wish someone wrote this for me...:D

kellyisgr8 said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 12:34 pm
kellyisgr8, Fairfax, Virginia
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this is also going in my favorites!

on Jan. 28 2010 at 2:33 pm
the_Horsegirl SILVER, Minneapolis, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
People need dreams, there's as much nourishment in 'em as food.
--Dorothy Gilman

If there is such a thing as truth, it is as intricate and hidden as a crown of feathers.
--Isaac Bashevis Singer

This is so sweet and musical-sounding. I really like it.

kellyisgr8 said...
on Jan. 22 2010 at 10:54 am
kellyisgr8, Fairfax, Virginia
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nostalgic ^_^

on Jan. 21 2010 at 5:23 pm
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
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:P :D

on Jan. 21 2010 at 5:22 pm
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
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aw i get a little teary too when i think about hwo quickly time passes by

on Jan. 21 2010 at 5:22 pm
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
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you're very welcome!

on Jan. 21 2010 at 5:22 pm
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
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thanks! :)

on Jan. 21 2010 at 5:21 pm
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
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lol im glad because i was feeling like a child when i wrot ethis

on Jan. 21 2010 at 5:08 pm
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
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very pleasing to the ear. good job!

kellyisgr8 said...
on Jan. 20 2010 at 6:15 pm
kellyisgr8, Fairfax, Virginia
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These words just melt on my tongue. It feels so nostalgic...i just want to cry.

kellyisgr8 said...
on Jan. 19 2010 at 8:57 pm
kellyisgr8, Fairfax, Virginia
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i can imagine myself out in a dark, cool night, with nothing but the wind in hair and me just soaking it all in . Thank you

kellyisgr8 said...
on Jan. 19 2010 at 6:45 pm
kellyisgr8, Fairfax, Virginia
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beautiful beautiful work.

kellyisgr8 said...
on Jan. 19 2010 at 6:34 pm
kellyisgr8, Fairfax, Virginia
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amazing. i feel like a child again.