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I just see red

February 9, 2010
By Thrush BRONZE, Tegaad, Other
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Thrush BRONZE, Tegaad, Other
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"Live life to it's fullest extent, it's the only life you've got" "Enjoy yourself, be yourself, love yourself"

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Sun rests on my lids
warm, enchanting, glowing
but i just see red

Sun tickles my feet
playing, laughing, smiling,
but I just see red

Sun tries to warm me
I try to open my eyes
Now I see my life

© Lauren S., Reading, Berkshire, UK

The author's comments:
I was cold, and I remembered how nice the sun felt on my eyelids, and I started writing about how people don't see he beauty.
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SamiLynn PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 12 2010 at 10:24 pm
SamiLynn PLATINUM, Anthem, Arizona
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"The unexamined life is not worth living." ~Socrates

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Short, sweet, simple. I loved it :)
lamelola GOLD said...
on Sep. 5 2010 at 10:24 pm
lamelola GOLD, Wichita, Kansas
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Great Job, isee red also :))
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Jun. 30 2010 at 8:26 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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this was perfect it made me smile at the thought of waking up with the sun coming in:) could you comment on my work?