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Blue Rose

May 7, 2010
By Ninten1992 PLATINUM, New York, New York
Ninten1992 PLATINUM, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Forgive and Forget".


Dancing rose curtsys.
Dripping its dew to the earth
Like a tear it falls.


The author's comments:
The inspiration for this piece was writing haiku in poetry class.

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on May. 28 2010 at 11:05 pm
Ninten1992 PLATINUM, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Forgive and Forget".

Oops, Spelled "gladly" wrong sorry. :(

on May. 28 2010 at 8:48 pm
Ninten1992 PLATINUM, New York, New York
27 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Forgive and Forget".

Thanks for your encouraging comment. :)

on May. 28 2010 at 8:47 pm
Ninten1992 PLATINUM, New York, New York
27 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Forgive and Forget".

Thanks! I will glady check out your work. :)

on May. 28 2010 at 6:29 am
Patience97 PLATINUM, New Tripoli, Pennsylvania
27 articles 8 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People believe that if we really want to eliminate something, focus on that. How much sense does it make for us to give the particular problem all of the energy, as opposed to focusing on trust, love, living in abundance, education, or peace? -Un.

Wow your poem is really great! I love the comparison you made in the first line with the rose and the dancer!! Check out my work :)

on May. 27 2010 at 7:55 pm
nicolette_rae BRONZE, Long Beach, California
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Favorite Quote:
The artist is the creator of beautiful things. -Oscar Wilde

wow! this is really good x] keep on writing!