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Can You Tell Me Who You Are?

June 8, 2010
By Babie PLATINUM, Modesto, California
Babie PLATINUM, Modesto, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I Hate Kid's I have to many realitives.....ahhhhh!"


Can You Tell Me Who You Are?

You smile

Then cry

You say hello

Then good-bye

You're so outgoing

Then you're shy

You don't give hints

Don't answer my why?

You're rich on the inside

Then look so awfully poor

You think you mean so little

When you're truly much more

Your smile, so sunny

Made me smile

When you cried, it rained

I was in pain

Your feelings have become

My feelings

See?

We are so alike

And I so truly pray

That, at least that

One thing

Will always

Remain the same


The author's comments:
When i wrote this it reminded me of my friends relation ship. Although I have never been in one myself.

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Babie PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 1 2010 at 5:23 pm
Babie PLATINUM, Modesto, California
30 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I Hate Kid's I have to many realitives.....ahhhhh!"

THANK YOU VERY MUCH :)

on Jul. 31 2010 at 6:24 pm
BlackAngelWings PLATINUM, Venice, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
New Moon - S. Meyer
'I flung my leg over the edge and ram through the knee deep water, it sprays all around me. "Edward!" I yell knowing it is useless. The crowd is too loud and my voice is breathless with exsertion. But I couldn't stop screaming.'

Wow, that very good. Congrats if you get published.

Babie PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 16 2010 at 11:28 pm
Babie PLATINUM, Modesto, California
30 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I Hate Kid's I have to many realitives.....ahhhhh!"

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