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Wicked Lovely

September 30, 2010
By BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)


Wicked lovely eyes
Staring down at my demise
I have no more cries

Bleeding out my life
With not a gun, not a knife
But with my past's strife

Wicked lovely tears
Reflected at me it peers
The end slowly nears

Me, Myself, and I
Alone with the mirror's cries
And my lone reply



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Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Nov. 4 2011 at 6:14 am
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

This is so good, I love it! You're just really good at writing and I really hope that you continue with it... you've got a future ahead of you if you want it... I'm sure you do.

Check out my stuff sometime?


on Oct. 5 2011 at 7:42 am
Eshshah PLATINUM, Galloway, New Jersey
32 articles 31 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep." -Robert Frost

I wish I could find pics that go that well with my writing... amazing poem! 5 stars!

on Sep. 17 2011 at 4:49 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

Thank yo-  erm- THANK-YOU SO MUCH!  haha  =]  btw, ive read some of your stuff, and i rly like it  =]

-Roze


on Sep. 16 2011 at 6:12 pm
Come-n-Gone GOLD, Unionville, Missouri
10 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
Isn't it funny how it only takes a few seconds to say hi, but forever to say goodbye?

There's nothing i can say that isn't obvious. It's amazing. No wait... IT'S AMAZING!!! I love the theme of it!!! Keep writing and never stop!!!

on Jul. 20 2011 at 11:16 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

thx so so much!  i'm happy u can see an improvement and enjoy my work =]  lolz thx again!

-Rose


on Feb. 28 2011 at 8:43 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

i know ive commented on a few of your poems. they just keep getting better:) its like they just keep getting more powerful with each theme. amazingg. plz keep writingg!!

on Oct. 29 2010 at 9:58 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

THANK-YOU, ANGEL!

I love that pic  :)

-Rose


on Oct. 13 2010 at 12:19 pm
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
65 articles 3 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
You say you don't remember,
But I will never forget

BEAUTIFUL, ROSE!

The picture goes strangely well with this poem, I love it!

-Angel