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This Haiku Right Here

October 8, 2010
By Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.


"Where is this haiku
you told me so much about?"
"This is it right here."


The author's comments:
It just came to me. Please commentate. I love you captain.

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on Nov. 27 2010 at 11:59 am
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

Me too, I like this...captain?!

on Nov. 2 2010 at 4:50 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

i know. exactly! you've just inspired me captain.

on Nov. 2 2010 at 2:40 pm
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

I like to thinks so...

(But could I ever

Pretend to lie the truth through

My poetic teeth?)

(As if nothing did

Happen. When we both know that

Something some how did.)

 


on Nov. 2 2010 at 2:27 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

smoothly done captain....

and now we pretend

like nothing ever happened.

Tsk. liar,liar.

 


on Nov. 2 2010 at 12:43 pm
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

I like this. O, Free Haiku for you:

(I touched your lips

With my right index finger.

You closed your eyes.)