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Sunrise

July 28, 2011
By MissColleen GOLD, Lebanon, Pennsylvania
MissColleen GOLD, Lebanon, Pennsylvania
14 articles 12 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
You know you're in love when you don't want to fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams.-Dr. Seuss


Early morning's light
Pale streaks across a new sky
Sun and moon as one


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on Aug. 4 2011 at 10:47 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

your haikus are wondeful. i love them all! I'm so wordy, i'm not very good at writing them so i am completely amazed at how much imagery you create in such a short poem such as haiku. great job! And that goes for all your haikus i read! :)

on Aug. 1 2011 at 5:04 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1646 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by.&quot; --Douglas Adams<br /> <br /> &quot;The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane.&quot; --Marcus Aurelius

You write excellent haikus!  This one in particular gives the reader a very beautiful picture in their head.  Great imagery!