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A Fatal Wish

July 29, 2011
By Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
31 articles 6 photos 577 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything's a triangle." ~ My mother

"Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it's the easiest way to be heard."

A wish because I
Want it. Fatal since with it,
I’m not me at all.

The author's comments:
I hope you grasp my meaning. It can actually be for anything; for me, the wish is to be someone else, yet if I were someone else, it wouldn't be the same for me as for them. It's better to simply accept yourself. :)

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This article has 5 comments.

on Oct. 31 2011 at 9:44 am
Calliashi SILVER, Litchfield Park, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
The man with the key is king and honey, you should see me in a crown. ~James Moriarty

I feel this way a lot. Good job putting it into such simple words!

on Sep. 6 2011 at 5:21 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

I like this haiku. I like the meaning and how you express it! Great job!

on Aug. 14 2011 at 10:09 am
MorenSore SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
9 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Liberty is not the power of doing what we like, but the right of being able to do what we ought."
~Lord Acton

Oddly worded but in a philosophical way.

on Aug. 8 2011 at 1:02 pm
JerseyGirl716 BRONZE, Central, New Jersey
2 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We gain strength, and courage, and confidence by each experience in which we really stop to look fear in the face... we must do that which we think we cannot." -Eleanor Roosevelt

I actually really liked the wording, and i definitely grasped the meaning. Great job! 5/5 :)

on Aug. 4 2011 at 11:06 am
Love.Hate.Passion., Spring Valley, Illinois
0 articles 0 photos 356 comments

Favorite Quote:
~Hope. Faith. Love~
~Be proud of who you are.You are all unique in a different way.~
~I WILL NOT fade into oblivion , and become less than
a distant memory.~

I understan what your trying to say , but the wording is odd. I understand that it's a haiku and that it has to be written a certain way.

Otherwise , good job. It said alot with a little :)