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Leaves at Kirstenbosch

August 13, 2011
By Sophie Rose Cope SILVER, Cape Town, Other
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Many little leaves
Arranged like growing pebbles On a tender bough

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Sophie Rose Cope SILVER said...
on Jan. 22 2012 at 5:03 am
Sophie Rose Cope SILVER, Cape Town, Other
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thank you for a thoughtful, lovely comment
Kingdom_of_the_Forgotten GOLD said...
on Jan. 22 2012 at 1:00 am
Kingdom_of_the_Forgotten GOLD, Ogden, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Time, the cradle of hope.... Wisdom walks before it, opportunity with it, and repentance behind it: he that has made it his friend will have little to fear from his enemies, but he that has made it his enemy will have little to hope from his friends." ~Charles Caleb Colton

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Visually simple, but it's emotional standing is so much more complex.
dancestar GOLD said...
on Sep. 6 2011 at 4:09 pm
dancestar GOLD, Westford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
BE WHO YOU WANNA BE NOT WHO OTHERS WANNA SEE!!!

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tht was very pretty...just one question..what does the title mean? and plz check out sum of my work like "Girl Next Door" and a piece tht is pending publishing "Free!!" "Alone" and "A Love Unreciprocated" thanks! and keep writing!
Sophie Rose Cope SILVER said...
on Aug. 17 2011 at 12:40 pm
Sophie Rose Cope SILVER, Cape Town, Other
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thank you! your adivice is very useful. That first word was indeed quite tricky to place. I will think on it more!
Harebelle GOLD said...
on Aug. 17 2011 at 12:17 pm
Harebelle GOLD, Vancouver, Other
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Pretty! I like the line about growing pebbles- it's very original. One suggestion: you could use a different two-syllable word in the first line instead of 'many', but it does work the way it is so that's just if you want to. Great job!