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Too Beautiful for this World

December 18, 2011
By beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt


A class all your own
Untouchable, majestic
What style, such flair.

All an illusion
Unsolvable the secret,
behind your smile.

A dark side unseen,
Drowning pain, swallowing
so much sorrow.

Magic pills you ate
After so much ache and hurt,
you sleep forever.

My sweet darling,
Why did you have to end it?
Your life so precious.

So young, so vibrant
A princess misunderstood,
fighting her demons.

Sweet, I will miss you
A void vacant, you left
in my bleeding heart.


The author's comments:
I originally wrote this with Marilyn Monroe in mind. She fits into the classification of artists who died so young--I guess this world was too much. In other words, they will be missed.

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on Feb. 8 2012 at 9:20 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1401 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Thanks for commenting~

Loftus GOLD said...
on Feb. 8 2012 at 8:41 pm
Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
11 articles 1 photo 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own, and you know what you know. And you are the one who'll decide where you'll go." -Dr. Seuss

This is my favorite piece of yours! So beautiful. Amazing job. Keep writing.

on Feb. 4 2012 at 5:05 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1401 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Thank you so much for commenting on so much of my work! It's so awesome hearing...well, reading what you think of my writing.

.Skyye. GOLD said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 2:50 pm
.Skyye. GOLD, Oroville, California
15 articles 19 photos 134 comments

Favorite Quote:
All I have seen teaches me to trust the Creator for all I have not seen.

I walk by Faith, not by sight

This is beautiful. I absolutely love it! I love the message in it, and I love the words you used: flair, vibrant, illusion, class, majestic, I love it :-)